Monday, January 5, 2015

What Remains

It is funny how, at times I struggle to keep my writing impersonal.  I have a tendency to create characters that are somewhat reflective of people I know, or even myself.  So far in this challenge I have used familiar places but haven't created a character that is based on the familiar.  Writing win!  Here is installment 5 of the 31 day writing challenge.

Prompt:
_______ always said he did not believe in ghosts until he saw _______ on that _______ night in the middle of _________.  He said it was the smell of _________ that made him realize …

Blake sat, hands shaking and tried to explain what had happened to his Mom.  Blake always said he did not believe in ghosts until he saw his Dad on that crazy night in the middle of the hospital room.  The smells of vanilla tobacco, Old Spice, and the earth that always seemed to linger around his Dad made him realize that he was not losing his mind.  Blake watched as his Dad approached Michelle and their newborn son.  His Dad stood and looked at his first grandson, born just weeks after his death.  Blake stood mesmerized and unsure what to do.  His Dad had obviously not realized he was there and Blake just wanted to drink in his image. The realization that his Dad was still with him and with his new son lifted his spirit in a way Blake could not even imagine.  The only problem now, was trying to make his Mom believe him.  His Mom looked at him and in the way, a mother only can, she knew.  She reached for his hands and looked him right in his eyes, “You saw your Dad didn’t you?”  Blake jerked back, “How did you know?”  “Oh honey, I feel his presence too, and if anything was going to keep him here it was the baby.  He was so excited and happy; he just couldn’t hang on long enough.  I knew he would find a way to see him.”    I did see him, the night Alex was born.  He stood over him and just smiled.  It was his smell, there was never anyone that smelled like him.”    I know baby, just remember that no matter what those that love us never really leave.  Their memory, love, and legacy remain.”

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